The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 29: It's my turn with my shooter after having a sweet. (7)

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A clue to CHOCTAW.
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.'my' is superfluous.
2.Extraneous words are considered a defect – what you really mean is "Turn with shooter after sweet"